Authors Note-This is a response to a word association that we did in class. Also if you can't read the text it is below.
A dull orange glow
As the flaming ball of fire
Ceases to reach its arms
To the scorched world
As it sets below the horizon
A lone boat drones on
Spray coming up from behind
As the skier cuts his way
Through the water
Calm as a pane of glass
Sitting atop the water
Sitting atop the water
How peaceful is the world
When the sun turns
To a dull orange glow
I can't read the text because of the way you set up the lay-out.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you chose a picture to go with the poem. But I couldn't really read some of the lines.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used really strong diction and were able to really get a grasp on describing what is going on with advance vocabulary words.
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